point 1/11, 2
adding an 11th point seems to be duplication as point 1 is "get professional" - why do you need to be more specific than that ?
On point 2 "Identify the leadership roles", I would like to propose that this should be extended to stakeholders, as a key stakeholder might not be in a leadership role but may be in a position to scupper the project. Look at some of the recent UK NHS projects with GP doctors as an example of this. for example there is a project to get GPs able to book appointments with specialists at hospitals on line with the patient there. But in reality the system has not been used as expected as GPs were not involved enough in the early stages so it does not seem to have their sign on.