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Headset lets you google your own thoughts

By Brainshock ·
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Hello Everyone in the TechRepublic community. My name is Jay and I have been working on a simple videos that talk about new internet discoveries. Most of them are science or technology based since that is what grabs my attention. These videos are meant for me to get better at video editing while forcing myself to learn about different science topics.

This week's episode was about Organoid minibrains inside rat bodies, scientists editing single letters of DNA code, and a headset made from MIT that lets you google your own thoughts.

I am up for criticism so if anyone has any suggestions for me on my editing or information, please let me know.

Thanks for seeing my first on thread on here and I hope to post much more!

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by john.a.wills In reply to Headset lets you google y ...

You wrote "homology" on the screen but said "homeology". That's like saying "grievious" for grievous".

You said something like "interconnection between X and Y" early on in the movie. But "inter" means "between", so you were being redundant. Try "connection between X and Y" or "interconnection of X and Y".

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by Brainshock In reply to speech problems

I will work on my pronunciation more and run through the script a couple of more times to ensure that the grammatical sentence structure is sound and makes sense. I apologize about my speech in that video but hope to fix it in up coming videos.

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