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Need your help (ugly webpage and PDF)

By rstan251 ·

I am trying to put together a career training program with some free information.

I feel like I am operating in a silo here...

My wife has no idea how to help me because she is not technical and I am unsure if this report is worth a damn.

Would you mind looking at this and providing me with some feedback?

FYI - this is not a website but a landing page.

Let me know what it is missing or what you liked or didn't like. The page links to a PDF which you can see by hovering your mouse (its not dangerous!):



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Fortune cookies, chocolates, proverbs?

by boxfiddler Moderator In reply to Reading santee is like wa ...

Confections. No wonder I hang here...

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Never tried a proverb before

by Oz_Media In reply to Reading santee is like wa ...

Do they stick to your teeth like toffee does?

Toffee: What the rest of the world calls

'A hungry man is an angry man.' Hmm, they are a bit dry.

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Couldn't the pdf, got a 403 error.

by boxfiddler Moderator In reply to Need your help (ugly webp ...

So I read your bio. Pretty hypey. If I didn't know better I'd swear you were God.

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by rstan251 In reply to Couldn't the pdf, got a 4 ...

It is a bit hollywood but that is what Bios advertisement.

I am actually a pretty normal dude. Just trying to get some feeback. So far, just getting slammed here..

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There has been some constructive feedback.

by boxfiddler Moderator In reply to Bio

It may not have been what you wanted to hear, or put the way you expected. But it's here.

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by rstan251 In reply to There has been some const ...

I can handle constructive feedback.

It is apparent that I have not presented enough information to actually receive what I am expecting.

I need head back to the drawing board and return with v 2.0.

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That sounds like a plan.... < nt >

by boxfiddler Moderator In reply to Feedback

Needs salt, far as I can tell.

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Let us know when 2.0 is ready.

by CharlieSpencer In reply to Feedback

In the meantime, look around and find some web sites you think convey the tone and emphasis you'd like to emulate. Notice the fonts, graphics, phrasing, etc. MS offers some canned web site templates you can download; examine some of those.

If your primary emphasis right now is on the content in the .PDF, why not post that here, or as the direct target of your link here? How long is it? As someone else noted, we're a bit of a suspicious lot here. We also rarely respond to peer mails from new members until we've gotten comfortable with you. Also, taking at topic off-line in a peer mail deprives other readers of the entire conversation.

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re: 2.0

by rstan251 In reply to Let us know when 2.0 is r ...

Appreciate the feedback, the advice regarding trust and off-line conversations.

I will be back with a new version soon...


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Or as Daffy would say

by Oz_Media In reply to Feedback


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