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October 18, 2009 at 03:51 PM
cazten

Critique my first resume please!

by cazten . Updated 16 years, 8 months ago

Hey guys, I’m currently looking to apply for a job and wanted to run my resume through you guys first to pick apart. This ones currently slightly tailored towards a entry network/infosec job.

Things to keep in mind while you review this:
1.) This is my first attempt at a real “tech” type job. I dont have any substantial work history experience in the field yet.
2.) I’m still in school and wont have my A.S. till late next year probably. Might have “certificate of acheivement” after next semester in one or two of them but I’m lacking some gen ed for the complete A.S.
3.) Under knowledge and skills section i listed basic knowledge i have of certain areas. I wasn’t sure how else to convey things i know since I don’t have any official certifications or degrees yet, but i have run through about 20 core units for my info sec degree, network admin degree, and have finished the book for the security+ exam. If you have better ideas on how to convey this or critiques on things to add or drop from it let me know

4.) The formatting was slightly skewed when exporting it as an html file for viewing convenience. The content is what I’m interested in for this critique.

File Link: http://hartiganwill.tripod.com/Work/html_resume

Thank you guys!

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